Pretty basic! Anon will be on, all are screened, I will be judicious about what gets in. For crit, I prefer specifics and examples. Inconsistencies are fine to bring up! Both within my RP and from canon. I don't have Henry's dialogue memorized so if you spot something, I'd like to know!
I'm probably gonna ignore tense switching because it happens a lot despite my efforts, so it's something I already know about.
I-statements preferred if possible. Thank you.
I'm probably gonna ignore tense switching because it happens a lot despite my efforts, so it's something I already know about.
I-statements preferred if possible. Thank you.